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原句：When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.
修改后：At the second traffic light turn left.
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句：The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.
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注：把句中的"three parts"改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必要的单词"which is written in"。我们经常可以将关系代词如"that"去掉，这只会引起最少的变动。
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